I am not agree with childlabor. Because children should only study, not work and they should enjoy their childhood, work is the responsibility of parents and not children. when the children only work, they lose several skills for thier development and knowledge.given that education is a very important factor in the live of children.
why do you think it exists in Colombia?
the main factor is that in Colombia there are a lot of ignorant people, that they prefer to live in poverty and not progress, and this leads to several irresponsible parents put their children to work. Laziness is factor whereby people do not progress and they want everything easy. for this reason many irresponsible parents put their children to work, beg and sell candies in buses.They do not do anything to escape poverty, they do not like to study, and they like to earn easy money begging and They do not like to strive, and there are many children that work. This is unfair and very true.
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ReplyDeleteInteresting ideas, but also think about why people are in poverty. Maybe some people do not have access to education or other opportunities.
Pay a bit more attention to syntax and to spelling, but overall good writing. ("I agree/disagree" not "I am not agree"