DO YOU AGREE WITH CHILD LABOR?
I DISAGREE WITH CHILD LABOR, BECAUSE CHILDREN COULD BE STUDYING. IN THIS MOMENT PEOPLE HAVE MANY OPPORTUNITIES FOR STUDY AND THEY HAVE MANY FORMS OF EMPLOYMENT. ON THE OTHER HAND, THE GOVERNMENT ARE GIVING SCHOLARSHIP TO HELP IN THEIR STUDY.
WHY DO YOU THINK IT EXISTS IN COLOMBIA?
MANY PEOPLE EMPLOYED CHILDREN BECAUSE THEY CAN GIVE LESS MONEY DESERVED IN THE DAY. ALSO, MANY PARENTS DO NOT HAVE RESOURCES TO SUPPORT THEIR FAMILIES FOR THIS REASON MANY CHILDREN WORK TO HELP THEIR PARENTS.
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ReplyDeleteGood ideas, but explain more. Give some more ideas and explain better your opinions. Pay attention to verb tenses (always have consistency in whether you are using past, present or future tenses).